Paradise

February 27, 2012 
 

Prologue

My wife called at 2 am. “Your daughter wants to talk,” she said. They were half-a-day ahead in India, on vacation. On such calls, I have standard questions for my daughter (Almost 2 now): What’s your name? What’s mama’s name? Did you eat mum-mum? She has rote the answers. In between she babbles a few things that I don’t understand, but I respond as if she makes perfect sense. This time though, she didn’t come on the phone. “Not in mood now,” said my wife! Think about someone calling you in the wee hours and then not having a mood for talk! How do you handle that? This parenting is going to make me one hell of a patient man!
 
 
Paradise

Unlike in India here in the US, parents, if they wish, can find out baby’s gender well in advance. At first, we had decided to keep it a secret; however, as the days went by we could not resist. Nine months is a long period for any secret.
 
I had an intuition for a daughter. Subsequent ultrasounds confirmed my hunch. I have written articles on my daughter while she was in the womb! I wonder if anyone does such a thing.
 
Being in the labor room, I was the first to see her - even before my wife. I was expecting the baby to look like its mother. So a big surprise was in store. She not only looks like me, but also over the time had all the trivial health issues that I had when I was of her age.
 
In the early days I could not sleep properly, whenever she was next to me. I feared, in my sleep, I might cause inconvenience to her. Later days, I would stack pillows next to her and sleep on the floor.
 
While asleep, Mother’s touch is a must - constant warmth is needed. When my wife steps out, I take the replacement. The child senses the change right away - however sound asleep she was.
 
She is almost two. Time flies. One day she will read this article. I wonder how she would feel. She might not like so much exposure. I myself won’t approve one of my parents writing about me - it’s quite embarrassing.
 
She knows about 20 words now: cheese, juice, fish, mum-mum, dudu, doggy, piggy, egg, cow, mamma, and a few more. She has mastered the words needed to manage her little world. May be this is how children learn. Prior to babbling, she used to cry to show disapproval. Later she learned to point at things she liked. Pointing was better; it was easier to understand her that way. Now she has learned to say NO. She has a strong opinion on everything. Even before completing my requests, she says NO - it’s a pain.
 
She calls dada all the time. Whether she knew the meaning of the word or simply chanted it like a parrot, was a mystery. One day someone showed her my picture and she said “dada!”
 
Once, she had a temperature; we rushed her to the hospital. I looked so desperate, the nurses and the staff thought I am the patient. The real patient was hiding under a bed, playing peek-a-boo.
 
Peek-a-boo is her favorite game; when she closes her eyes, she thinks, she has turned invisible - no one can see her: ostrich!
 
Boys are different. One time, at a friend’s home, I asked hi-five from a small boy; at the very moment someone had distracted me. My limp hand was still in the air; meanwhile this kid climbed the nearby couch and jumped at me and hit as hard as possible as if that was his last hi-five. As if he wanted to give me his best hi-five. Girls are different; when asked for a hi-five, most of the time they shy away; occasionally you get a mild pat.
 
Sometimes, she wakes me up in the wee hours; Points to the kitchen. I follow her to the fridge. She knocks at the giant door. “Cheese,” she says. I open the door. Unwrap the thin cheese slice and I wait silently till she finishes it. She offers me a morsel. I am not expected to decline. This fatty stuff at odd hours makes me gain wait and cholesterol. We walk back silently to the bedroom. Then I put her to sleep. Wait for the rhythmic breathing, then stack pillows next to her, and sleep on the floor.
 
One time, for a fancy dress event, we had dressed her up like an angel. Her Mother had done extensive shopping for the occasion. On the day, the little angel played and danced and jumped with other angels, spider-men, and little devils. When her time came for the stage show though, she was fast asleep. She could not participate in the event; but she had a blast.
 
The boys, about her age, are aware that she is a girl. They are gentle with her. The roughness of their games substantially decreases whenever she is around. She, though, is unaware of this chivalry. She fights with them and pulls their hair. Poke fingers into their eyes.
 
One time a water glass broke in the kitchen; she was immediately secured in a high chair; the floor was combed several times for tiny glass pieces. Then wiped, mopped, and vacuumed. Only then she was released from the high chair. Next day, I am in my room doing some chores, she comes to me, and places a large glass piece in my hand.
 
Another time she had managed to put both her hands in the pickle jar. I reached her in seconds; my wife, who was not in the picture, somehow reached her at the same time. I held the baby’s hand securely; my wife lifted her gently; like this we took her to the sink and washed her hand again and again. She never realized how close she was to the danger. She enjoyed the attention, playing all the time in the tap water.
 
My articles are becoming shorter and infrequent. I used to write for an hour everyday. Not anymore. She won’t allow me. I can only write till she gets impatient, which is frequent. Then I need to leave everything aside to play with her. When she sleeps, I run to my desk, to write a few pages.
 
Next to the writing desk, the shelves house an array of books. These are more books than most people read in a life time. They are neatly categorized. I know their place by-heart. Whenever my daughter is in the room, she shuffles the books on the bottom racks - the ones she could reach. When she sleeps, I re-arrange them, knowing well that she would re-shuffle again. These books have been collected over a period of time. They had been handled with great affection. But now in some of them you will find baby hand-prints. Some dear books have doodles on the front covers. It kills me. I hope the doodler reads them, when the time comes.
 
I am no more center of my life; there is no greater joy than being a parent. For me, even if I lose everything, the awareness, the knowledge, and the wealth, the fact that I have a child would ensure my sanity anytime.
 

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Comment on this article

  • Shahid, Bangalore

    Thu, May 10 2012

    Good Article, ur daughter 'll like it for sure!

  • Darryl, Mangalore/Dubai

    Thu, Mar 22 2012

    Superb....

  • Yash, Mangalore

    Tue, Mar 20 2012

    Great article Ravi..Keep more coming

  • Savitha, Kinnigoly

    Fri, Mar 16 2012

    Very nice article but a short one. Your daughter is really lucky. She will get to read her childhood moments. Keep writing..

  • Leena Mendonsa, Shankerpura

    Fri, Mar 09 2012

    Good article.... keep on writing. All the best.

  • Kamath V, Blore

    Mon, Mar 05 2012

    Wonderful article yet again..Keep writing..thts a request..n let me tell you she will love each word when she grows up and reads this..

  • Sherwin, Mangalore

    Thu, Mar 01 2012

    Havent seen the first steps my sons walked EVER, havent held him or woken up to a crying at night EVER. He was never with me. My spouse chose to satisfy her parents and give the best years of my child to them rather than the father ( ME). Feels sad, how some women treat their husbands. This is said by a friend who misses his son so much . Sigh!

  • Imran Kaup, Dubai

    Wed, Feb 29 2012

    Just "WaaaaW" - ur sweet angele get surprise while reading this article- Highly apprecited, feel like readin it again !

  • Pressy Mascarenhas, Kinnigoly/Mira Road

    Wed, Feb 29 2012

    Very nice article Ravi.Enjoyed your article.Small and sweet.

  • Stany DSouza, Udyavar / Santa Clarita, LA, USA

    Wed, Feb 29 2012

    Good article. Very well written.

    I too have a similar experience with my daughter. She keeps me busy all the time. She is one year old and keeps us busy all the time.

    I have a elder son who takes good care of her sister.

  • joyer, kinnigoli

    Tue, Feb 28 2012

    I guess you are experimenting with your writing style.

    I felt as if my next door neighbour is telling me all about , what his/her kid did last evening.

    Always a pleasure reading you.

  • Raj P, Mangalore

    Mon, Feb 27 2012

    Good memoirs Ravi !

  • Anita, Kinnigoli

    Mon, Feb 27 2012

    You little ostrich is a lucky ostrich, she will have these treasured moments of her life to read someday. God Bless you and your family. Hope you get more time for writing.

  • Fernandes, Shirva, UAE

    Mon, Feb 27 2012

    Sweet Article 'Mr. Lobo'.
    "She calls dada all the time. Whether she knew the meaning of the word or simply chanted it like a parrot, was a mystery. One day someone showed her my picture and she said 'dada!'", liked the most...
    Good Luck for future...
    'God Bless Ur Sweet Daughter'..

  • Olin Lasrado, Padil

    Mon, Feb 27 2012

    It is a pleasure to read your articles.. Simply make one recollect all the pleasures one just take them for granted… Thank you for this & all your lovely articles. I am a big fan of your & have made all my friends too...

  • Smitha, Dubai

    Mon, Feb 27 2012

    Very Sweet Article Ravi, as always…Keep writing !!!

  • Philomena Lobo, Kulshekar/Bahrain

    Mon, Feb 27 2012

    Was wondering why no articles from Ravi these days...now I know! Good luck!!

  • Tony Crasta, Mangalore/Sydney

    Mon, Feb 27 2012

    Enjoyed your article Ravi, as usual, full of humour, sweet as well, though this time it was short. Keep going.

  • Sylvia, Kinnigoli

    Mon, Feb 27 2012

    Hi Ravi,
    Good one....Your daughter will be thrilled to know that her dad had written sooomuch about her.


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