My Angelic Mom...

  •   Thu, Nov 10 2011
  •   By Amanda Viegas

November 11, 2011

This one is dedicated to my mom up above…

Love u ma... this one is for you 
 

My Angelic Mom

 
  

Fondly I remember

The feel I felt in her womb

The womb of a mother so cozy & warm…

Mama prayed & planned everything for me

With millions of dreams she waited in glee…

It was then time for me to come

In the sparkling light of the night

I caused her pain… A lot of pain…

At last she heard a cry of mine…

With mama there

I basked in love & care

Days rolled on

And from class to class I moved on…

After a few years…

One break of dawn,

She was dressed like a bride

And was gone leaving me all all alone!!!!!!

Then...I did not know why

I had to tell her good byeeeeeee…

She waved & went far away from me

And said with tearful eyes... “Oh ma child it had to be me”

So, back to her, I waved & said,

Ma come back soon & I would be here waiting for you...
The love & the care she had shown to me

I lost them all that day

Along the field , above the sea

Up at the heaven I gazed...
 

My life I thought had ended, before it actually began

God took away my mom & you know what...?

Never ever did she return...
 

My mamma's death had made me sad

But it was my dad who filled the void

It was you dad,

Who held me through

And I could live because of you...
 
You gave me life

You gave me joy...

You let no tear escape my eye....
 

LOVE U DAD.

 
By Amanda Viegas
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Comment on this article

  • pranav.a, india

    Thu, Feb 23 2017

    maam i liked your poem and i am sorry what happened to your mom.

  • ashfaq and pranav, india

    Thu, Feb 23 2017

    mam , we are very sorry for your early loss .

  • Dhairya kumar Lamba, Sharjah rolla

    Thu, Feb 23 2017

    Hi mam i can understand your feelings even when my mom will die I will feel the way you are feeling

  • Alina Mariam John, Dubai,UAE

    Sun, Nov 20 2016

    Amanda mam I understand your feelings.I hope that you feel better now.

  • Sasha , Dubai

    Sun, Nov 20 2016

    Dear Mam I like the way you put your feeling in a beautiful poem

  • Lavena, Mumbai

    Thu, Nov 17 2011

    Hi Amanda, You have penned down a very heart touching poem about your mom... I too lost my mom and miss her every single day of my life, I only wished if I could have her back in my life again... I always look at the sky and speak to her and I know that she is there for me always whenever i remember her..Our mothers are in paradise cos thats the only place where can be and they are watching us from above..luv u mom

  • Charmene, Muscat

    Thu, Nov 17 2011

    I too lost my mother 7 months ago and reading your poem made me cry..my mom was born on 5 Aug a day before your mom. I miss her every single day. I want to tell you that you have voiced my thoughts exactly so meaningful and heart touching. I truly believe parents never leave their children even in death continue to guide them from up above. Our mothers are in paradise looking down on us.

  • Geralyn Pinto, Mangalore

    Tue, Nov 15 2011

    Dearest Amanda - you've brought tears to my eyes. God bless you, your dad and your late mum.
    Geralyn

  • alwin rego, bajpe

    Mon, Nov 14 2011

    Hi Amanda, God Bless u each & every time .A very heart touch poem sure will see from heaven , she is blessing u @ as well Urs friend .

  • wilma serrao, mangalore

    Mon, Nov 14 2011

    Hi amanda,

    Finally it's here. Dear ur mother is always with you. This is a wonderful poem that u have written for ur mom :) I am very proud of you. god bless you my dear :)

  • erica viegas, manglore

    Mon, Nov 14 2011

    Amanda.......really im lucky to have u as my sister........love u loads....n d poem is....no words to describe......

  • PASCAL VIEGAS, MANGALORE

    Mon, Nov 14 2011

    WONDERFUL COMPOSITION WITH HEART TOUCHING FEELINGS,KEEP IT UP AMU
    I AM PROUD OF U GOD BLESS U.

  • linet Noronha, udupi

    Sun, Nov 13 2011

    very nice..heart touching poem..Your poem brought tears in my eyes.God bless u

  • savitha fernandes, mangalore

    Sun, Nov 13 2011

    Nice poem Amanda .May your mom's soul rest in peace.

  • Jessy, Udupi/Jeddah

    Sun, Nov 13 2011

    Dear Amanda, your feelings about your mom and dad, really brought tears into my eyes. May your mom's soul rest in peace !

  • Albert Gonsalves, Mangalore / U.A.E.

    Sun, Nov 13 2011

    A beautiful, very touching tribute to your Mum. God bless her soul.Take heart Amanda as she is watching over U from heaven above.

  • Della Rego, Mangalore, Qatar

    Sun, Nov 13 2011

    Dear Amanda, your poem brought tears in my eyes! so touching words. Your dad is so brave and got extra courage to lookafter you and you too are now become so strong with your moms love and memories with in you. Having our own mom and being a mom it counts a lot in a family for each single person. May God bless you all.

  • Francis menezes, Moodubelle /Abudhabi

    Sun, Nov 13 2011

    Very nice heart touching poem.God bless you .And sure your mom will pray in Heaven for all of your family members.

  • Loy, Kuwait

    Sun, Nov 13 2011

    Wonderful, God Bless You... Amanda.

  • Liz, Kuwait

    Sat, Nov 12 2011

    Your article brought tears to my eyes. God bless you Amanda.

  • Ravish Pinto, Kateel/Dubai

    Sat, Nov 12 2011

    Good one Amanda..,God Bless..

  • Aurelia, Mangalore

    Sat, Nov 12 2011

    hey amanda...loved it. u've written it beautifully. :)can feel uve poured your heart out.
    lots of love, aurelia

  • Evita,

    Sat, Nov 12 2011

    This is really a wonderful poem , I am sure ur mom has loved it. Take care . god Bless .

  • Dexter Britto, Mangalore/Auckland

    Fri, Nov 11 2011

    Very beautiful and touching poem, Amanda.God bless

  • Sunil Pasanha, Dubai

    Fri, Nov 11 2011

    Her touching and this shows the weightage of parents love & care.

  • Andrina Pais, Bajpe/Singapore

    Fri, Nov 11 2011

    Very touching one Amanda....

  • L Dsilva, Udupi, Manipal

    Fri, Nov 11 2011

    Heart touching Poem. Could not stop my tears.God bless u Lady and all loving Dads who take care of their angels.

  • Anet, Shirva /Dubai

    Fri, Nov 11 2011

    Wonderful & heart touching poem.

  • Rohan , Mangalore

    Fri, Nov 11 2011

    i would say this is a wonderful composition to any parent...it is very lively and nicely composed .....All the best hope u post some more articles....keep up the good work...

  • Rohan karkada, Mangalore

    Fri, Nov 11 2011

    Its superb amanda...Its really heart touching....kp going....god bless... :)

  • Vinol Rego, Mangalore / Newcastle

    Fri, Nov 11 2011

    Nice one amy!!!

  • Godwin Castelino, Mangalore/Bangalore

    Fri, Nov 11 2011

    Wonderful composition with lots of true feelings in it... Keep it up Amanda.. you are Blessed...!

  • Dixon, Bangalore

    Fri, Nov 11 2011

    Beautiful and heart touching.i pray for everyone who lost their mother. let you all get the love from your dad.

  • Pamita, M'lore/Kuwait

    Fri, Nov 11 2011

    Good one Amanda...Very Well done !Nice one about your mom and dad !!!
    Through this, even we would like to thank our "MOM, DAD, MOTHER-IN-LAW & FATHER-IN-LAW".
    Even though there are no enough words to thank them, we would like to say that you all are our special gifts that God gave to us.
    We wish we could tell you, how much you all mean to us.
    Just want to say,"Love you & thank you for all your love, care & support and for all that you've done to us !!!
    Wishes from,
    Naguri/Kaup/Pangla/Sakleshpur/Chilmbi

  • bettina vijay monteiro, mangalore

    Fri, Nov 11 2011

    very touching.ur mom is looking at u from above and very proud of u.

  • Max and Jessie Rasquinha, Mangalore, Houston/Dallas

    Fri, Nov 11 2011

    What a beautiful tribute to the departed mother. Do take courage, dear Amanda, and may God help you in your daily life while your mother will watch over you and guide you in all that you do.

  • Suman, Mangalore

    Thu, Nov 10 2011

    very touching.

  • Michael & Shobha Valdar, Loretto, Bantwal, Abu Dhabi

    Thu, Nov 10 2011

    Hi Amanda, lovely dedication, we miss ur mom too, very caring, we are sure she is watching u from heaven up above and surely be proud of her daughters achievements, ur dad too a gentleman & we are proud to be part of your family, God Bless

  • Sylvia, Kinnigoli

    Thu, Nov 10 2011

    Hi Amanda

    Nice poem about your mom. She will be surely happy seeing your love.


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