Grandmother...

January 27, 2012

Grandmother...

She had a wish
Her death wish-that
Her body to be wrapped
With the shroud from Mecca

A long piece of
White cotton cloth
Thoughtfully bought
From her last pilgrimage to the Holy city

Healthy and strong she was
After distributing Zakath on the Ramadan month
I saw the brightness of her face
The happiness was different from other time

My nasty mind told me
The dying lamp burns high
I shooked off the thought
Dont be silly though

She left us
On a New year's eve
The whole world celebrating
But for me it was mourning though

Oh! she went back
Tears stacked in my eyes
I want to roll down and cry
But the rules prohibited me

There she came, washed and then
Wrapped in white cloth
My eyes were blurred
The salty water masking my eyes

In the back ground of heavy prayers
With the mystic smells
That haunted me for years
She slept - her last deep sleep

Memories are like huge tree
Deep rooted and heavily branched
Will be with everyone
Till the day to the grave

I get the vision of my childhood
Running after the lamb she raised
Feeding the chicks she grew
And helping her harvest the veggies

I liked her smell
The smell of eucalyptus and sandal oil combined
I liked her eyes
The eyes that were deep to see what I felt

I liked her hair-soft and white
which was like the cotton fluff
It too had the mystic smell
of pepper, camphor and wild amla

There I saw them taking her away
Chanting the versus that leads her the way
For a moment I wished I too could go with her
To give her company..that she gave me althrough my ways.

 

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By Neema Shahir
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Comment on this article

  • nihal, trivandrum/abudhabi

    Sun, Mar 04 2012

    i like this poem.the expression you have given in some placesis so beautiful.

  • B.M.Sunaif, Saudi Arabia

    Tue, Feb 07 2012

    It was nice nd my mind turned back to lot of memories while I read ur felling’s neema which was in the word. The love, the care which v get from our grand ma is really a heartily one but I feel very low whenever I remember her.. no words to express the love which she showed to me and only the happiness which she was humbled to see with me.

  • Shabir, Al Khobar KSA

    Mon, Feb 06 2012

    Your poem wet my eyes. Really it is the true feeling. I impressed a lot. Keep on writing . Jazak Allay Khyr

  • Charles D'Mello, Pangala

    Fri, Feb 03 2012

    Nice one. Congratulations M/S neema Shahir

  • steevan , ajman /sacheripate

    Fri, Feb 03 2012

    GOOOD ONE.....NICE THOUGHTS

  • Alban D' Souza, Udyavara Mumbai Doha Qatar

    Tue, Jan 31 2012

    Congratulations. Very well written. Gentle views of a grand mother. Keep it up Neema. The love for grand mother is great, appreciated.The rythem of the peom is good and interesting to read. The relationshop of elderly people specially in this technical and commercail world very much important. God bless

  • Niranjan, Bangalore

    Mon, Jan 30 2012

    The last para was exceptionaly good.the rhyming was perfect.Congratulations.

  • Shishir, uduppi

    Mon, Jan 30 2012

    "Dying light burns high" -you were able to sense the message.. keep going..

  • Laila Pinto, Mangalore

    Mon, Jan 30 2012

    Wonderful poem. Sorry for the loss of your grandma.
    Reading your poem brought back the wonderful memories of my grandmother.

  • pauline D, belman / Mumbai

    Sun, Jan 29 2012

    Hey Neema, lovely poem - you stole my feelings. Grandma's are the best, most loving and caring and when u are in trouble, you can hide behind them :). My grandma fed me milk straight while milking so that I get more share, and remain healthy (did not understand her tricks as a child but I do now), i got the cream from the butter milk, i got the best of all. I am so lucky to have had two grandmas but it is sad to see the new generation not having this privilege - society is drifting away from the wisdom of our grandparents. At times i owe my life to my grandma, she was my model, my pillar and the most beautiful woman on earth - inside out. RIP grandma(s) you are missed but thanked daily.

  • Hari V S, Belgaum

    Sun, Jan 29 2012

    Death is a reality which most of us realize only when we face it. Between the lines I can see the pain in losing dear ones. well sculptured lines with emotional intimacy. waiting for your new poems.

  • prarthana, hubli

    Sun, Jan 29 2012

    From your poem i could touch the bond between you and your grand mother. sorry for your loss. God bless both of you.

  • manu, karnataka

    Sun, Jan 29 2012

    grand maas are real blessings. they shower endless affection and love. well written poem. keep writing

  • Silishi, Trivandrum

    Sun, Jan 29 2012

    Really i don't have words to comment this poem.If i will say woderfull , excellent , it is not enough.
    You have a very good talent to write. Keep it up. My prayers always with you

  • yasmin, ksa

    Sun, Jan 29 2012

    a wonderful piece of work Neema.... it just reminds me that be it my grandmother or yours they are all so special giving unconditional love all the time that they are around....tnx for bringing back memories, atleast we can pray for them.

  • Rayan Lobo, Mangalore

    Sun, Jan 29 2012

    Dear Neema Sahir,
    I have read your earlier writings too.You have a very good style of writing.

    I Love to read your poems.

    Keep up your good work.

  • Raiel D'souza, Mangalore

    Sun, Jan 29 2012

    very tender and loving poem.in this era of nuclear family, the love for ones grand parents should be appreciated. God bless.

  • Sajid , Mangalore / Yanbu-KSA

    Sat, Jan 28 2012

    Good one Neema.. it clearly shows the relationship between a person n his/her grand parents.. n also symbalises the LOVE shared between the two...

  • Vidya, Mangalore

    Fri, Jan 27 2012

    Very well written Neema... You really have a talent.. you reminded me of my Grand Ma...Thanks a lot.. and you also reminded me the love that my in laws have towards my son.. Will always remember your poem.. God bless


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