Bus Journey - Of Aunties, Ajjis and Owls!

June 25, 2012


A lot of us bus travelers long for the days when we will be able to puff up our chests with pride and say, ‘Mere paas gaadi hai, bungalow hai, daulat hai…tumhare paas kya hai? (I have a car, bungalow, wealth.. what do you have?)’ But for now, being the paupers that we are, we shall continue to use by far the most popular means of public transport - the ever so dependable BMTC bus.

If you’ve ever experienced buses during rush hours, you know it’s not a joy ride and sometimes it can be pretty nerve racking. In fact you’re almost certain to hear an aunty shriek, “E huduga! Nodkond hogakke aagalva? Cultureless fellow!” (Oye boy! Can’t you look where you’re going?) However it’s such terrible experiences that give you a sense of immense joy when you climb onto a bus with a variety of vacant seats for you and this elation is heightened when you find that there’s a prestigious window seat waiting for You. With the wind blowing in your face and the outside world a slow-motioned blur, you experience a high like no other. You’ve opened yourself to a whole other world the moment you step into a bus.

All you spoilt brats with two wheelers and mothers that don’t think you’re going to drive yourself into a tree at the speed of 5 kmph or daddy darlings that vigilantly drop you off to college, this article is for you. Let me take you through the adventure I set upon everyday and the types of people I come across.


The  Auntyji

You have to watch out for her. If the Auntyji decides to stay close to your vicinity, you can be assured your ride is not going to be a peaceful one. The Auntyji often really doesn’t want to travel by bus but thoughts like ‘Ishtu doora hogakke sumne dhuddu yaake kodli?’(Why waste money to go just this far?) take over and she gets on, bulky saris and all. If you’re standing next to her and you appear reasonably sturdy, she will rest some part of her on you and if you’re lucky it won’t be your foot. In return, she will give you a sheepish smile (her foot is unlikely to budge). The Auntyji is usually nice to the Good Samaritan, especially if it’s the plaited schoolgirl, and will offer to hold her bag for her.


The plaited schoolgirl

Given seats, this type can be rather amusing to listen to but standing in a crowded bus, they pose as quite a sorry figure. Bags that could hold watermelons rest on their shoulders with lunch boxes in one hand and a water bottle in the other. Their tininess tends to get them bullied by other passengers and the conductor can either be their best friend or their worst enemy. It’s either a kind smile and, “Yen thinde beligge?”(What did you eat in the morning?) or a shove and “Bag thegi! BAG THEGI!”(Remove your bag!). When seated, the schoolgirl will gladly and ungrudgingly hold your bag for you but she will expect the same from you.

Pray and hide.


The Ajji

The ajji will guilt you out of your seat. When you see her struggling to get into the bus you will suddenly find that you have lost all bodily control and are getting up to offer her your seat. Later, with the side of your face smashed against a pole, you will curse her children for being ungrateful little twats and not buying her a car with a personal driver.


The Hoovammas (ghajra weavers)

They fill the otherwise suffocating bus with the fragrance of mogra flowers but you can forget getting a place to sit-or even a place to stand. They build their own little personal fortress with their giant bag of flowers and they will not give you free flowers no matter how cute your puppy-dog eyes are. No, not even if you’re Puss in Boots. The plaited schoolgirl has tried this.


The Good Samaritan

The Good Samaritan reminds you why you are a terrible member of the society. All she wants is to help our senior citizens have a comfortable ride and it’s this innocence that makes you hate yourself. But don’t worry-you will feel better when the Good Samaritan realizes she has to stand all the way till Majestic and that ajji she just selflessly helped has gotten off the bus and offered her seat to her 11 year old granddaughter’s friend.


The Owls

You will come across this type if you get the opportunity to sit in one of those two dreaded seats that face the rest of the bus, where the most you can do is stare uncomfortably out of the window until your neck cramps up and you’re forced to face the audience. The owl will blankly stare at you as though looking into the very depths of your soul although they’re probably wondering if all the beans and daal they had for lunch would prove to be disastrous and if they ought to get off the bus at the next stop to avoid an unpleasant situation.

 

 

By Shivani Prakash Naik
Shivani Prakash Naik (daughter of Prakash Naik) was born and brought up in Muscat, Oman. She completed her studies up to 10th standard in Muscat. Later on she moved to Bangalore where she is currently she is doing her second year bachelors degree in arts in MES College, Malleshwaram. She has been writing articles for past 5-6 years and some of her articles were published in Muscat newspapers and also won weekly prizes. Other than writing, she has learnt painting, music, karate and is also a good swimmer.
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Comment on this article

  • Agnello, Mangalore/Muscat

    Mon, Jul 09 2012

    Stories of the 'common (wo)man' [RK Laxman] in prose. Great observation and humour Shivani.

  • Sharath Kumar, Udupi/Bangalore

    Thu, Jun 28 2012

    Good.Nice to write and read articles on such topics. Even I do write rarely.

  • ganesh, dubai

    Thu, Jun 28 2012

    Keep it up, good job.Congratulations Shivani

  • Langoolacharya., Belman/USA.

    Thu, Jun 28 2012

    Shivani,

    Keep it up, good job.

    One day you will be a great writer.

    Big race starts with a small first step......

    Some day you have to (re?)visit Salala in Oman and paint natural beauty of it....best banana and coconut plantation I ever seen is in Salala,Muscat.

    Regards,

    Langoolacharya.

  • Vinod John, Mangalore

    Wed, Jun 27 2012

    Very nice writing Shivani.. I could relate to everything you wrote.. The terrible childhood life when me and my little bro were bullied due to heavy bags. Sometimes we just prayed we have the "good" conductor. Painful memories.. Today I hardly go by bus but the memory does not fade.. I had some worst disgusting experiences with few pervert men and women too!!!! All in the crowded bus...All Disturbing memories.. There are bad men and women too..who touch.. I dont know how many have experienced it.. But there are..

  • kish, udupi

    Wed, Jun 27 2012

    ur goobe comment....apppata satya...naan kooda hang kuthkondu hogiddine

  • NASIR, KARKALA

    Wed, Jun 27 2012

    chalte bano.......BOMBAY to GOA

  • viky, Mangalore

    Wed, Jun 27 2012

    Good one Shivani..the article u wrote will remind every single person about their journey in bus. Continue this work which you are doing from many years.All the best May God Bless uuuuuu....

  • John DSouza, Mangalore

    Tue, Jun 26 2012

    Congratulations Shivani,
    Glad for many Complements, Sad for no Solutions

  • satish, Kundapur

    Tue, Jun 26 2012

    Nice Article Shivani, you remind me my past days before 8 yrs.but there is burglar also in BMTC.it was nice experience.

  • Ravi Lobo, Kinnigoli/ Wisconsin

    Tue, Jun 26 2012

    A fine article. You write very well. I haven’t traveled much in Bangalore buses, but I have my shares of experiences, which are not much different than yours. You have a keen observation the language and choice of words are very smooth.

    Keep writing. Good luck.

  • Shalet, Bangalore/Kuwait

    Tue, Jun 26 2012

    Nice article shivani.... Reading it made me relive the commuting days during my engg college... Since my travel was always from the end bus-stops, most of the time i fortunately got the window seats and got to see live, all mentioned in this article... Keep up the good work... looking forward to read more articles from you.

  • RIYAZ AHMED BH, BASRUR / MUSCAT

    Tue, Jun 26 2012

    FANTASTIC ARTICLE - SHIVANI, GOD BLESS YOU KEEP IT UP, THANKS TO DAIJIWORLD, THIS TYPE OF ARTICLES HAS TO COME IN NATIONALISE NEWS PAPER.

  • Suresh Salian, Mangalore

    Mon, Jun 25 2012

    Shivani, great…… nice article, you have tipped off your personnel experience in BMTC,keep it up looking forward to see more articles of yours.

  • yadava suvarna, urwa,Mangalore@nowKSA

    Mon, Jun 25 2012

    nice article,with real facts you mention on day to day life on common
    man Travelling with BMTC.

  • Nanag, Kinnigoly/Oman

    Mon, Jun 25 2012

    Good article . You have a great potential. keep writting .

  • Manasi, Bangalore

    Mon, Jun 25 2012

    The article reaks of age discrimination.

  • Allen, Mangalore

    Mon, Jun 25 2012

    Very interesting subject.
    Keep writing,hope to read more from you.

  • Shekar Moily Padebettu, Udipi/India

    Mon, Jun 25 2012

    Congratulation shivani for your beautiful article which contains real facts of bus journey.Shivani's article is like SHIVA-VANI.This experience of yours confined to Bangalore only.This is happening in almost all Metropolitan cities.Mangalore is not exception.Horrible and suffocating bus journey during peak hours of the day.If you are lucky on that particular day you will reach your destination very safely otherwise something or other you have to meet gracefully.Apart from crowded bus journey, drivers rash driving,conductors abusive/filthy languages "O" my God it is really amazing and heartwrenching.But this is life we have to undergo all these ordeals in our day today life.At the end our supreme power GOD is the ultimate source.Pray him before you start any work,journey.he will guide you in a proper way.Thank you Shivani for your meaningful aticle.

  • K.RAO, MANGALORE

    Mon, Jun 25 2012

    Hi Shivani,
    Nice to see your article in Daijiworld. Your real life experience of BMTC buses poured out in a satirical frame work is really enjoyable. You are taking us through this journey without any bumps and bounces unlike the BMTC.
    Keep up the good work!

  • Prasad, ajman

    Mon, Jun 25 2012

    gud article shivani ....but i liked the Owls which u hav described it so fantastically . Reminds me my days in bangalore travelling on these BMTC busses. " Yarralli cheeti padeeri(ticket) munde checking ide"

  • Ted, Mangalore

    Mon, Jun 25 2012

    I pray to god everytime i have to ply on Mangalore-Udupi road. More people die each year on NH66 than through other causes. Travelling on NH66 is like asking for death.

  • John DSouza, Mangalore

    Mon, Jun 25 2012

    Congratulations Shivani. Nice article with real facts. It is need of the hour to find a proper solution to our transport problems.
    Seriously, we have to think of a new concept to meet our multiplying demand for public transport. The new concept will help us to have a considerable reduction in fuel consumption (expensive and exhausting), health hazardous air pollution and peace disturbing sound pollution. It is hard to win the public support for a revolutionary change (to break lengthy evolution of automobiles), which can offer enormous social, economic and environmental benefits.
    Instead, the only solution we look at is to have our own vehicles, which really adds oil to the fire, making the roads more congested and situation of public, miserable.

  • JNPBILLAVA, Kundapura/Muscat

    Mon, Jun 25 2012

    Good one...Just reminisced my past days in Bangalore….Travelling with BMTC for routine work .…Always alerted for my valuable stuffs to avoid pickpockets...Ooh..It was an amazing experience..


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