Story: Manchige

October 27, 2025

Aitha climbed up his watchtower in the lush green paddy fields. The grown-up plants were almost ready for harvest — the leaves were thick, and the shining golden rice crops were full and heavy. It was truly a treat to the eyes. This was the work he had been doing since his father’s time. Age and poor health had made it harder these days, yet during those three crucial months, he still wanted to protect his landlord’s crops from wild animals. 

The manchige was a night watchtower built by Aitha himself. It had a small roof and a sleeping space enclosed by wooden walls. Beneath it, he kept a fire burning for warmth and to ward off wild animals. A lantern hung above, and beside it were his whistle and machete. At times, he would shout into the darkness — partly to scare away animals, and partly to remind his landlord that he was awake and alert. 

It was a challenging task. 

The Malnad region was known for its beauty. In those days, rice cultivation was mostly for family needs rather than business. Landowners with several acres usually kept them for their own families and the workers who served them. 

Those were cold, dark nights when rain poured for weeks. The wind howled through the fields, and mist rolled down from the hills. Electricity was unreliable during the rainy season. A narrow road ran between two hills; on one side stood a small grocery and a tea shop, while on the opposite hill rose two lavish bungalows belonging to the landlords. The land was divided between two brothers, whose sons — Surappa and Beerappa — later inherited it. Though they were cousins, enmity existed between them in almost everything. In those times, landowners took pride not in caring for their workers, but in displaying power over them. 

The workers alternated each year — one year with Surappa, the next with Beerappa. Every March, they settled accounts: workers received their wages, cleared their debts, and chose which landlord they would serve for the next year. Aitha remained loyal to Beerappa. 

For an estate worker, April and May were dry months — a time for fertilizing, maintaining irrigation, and pruning trees before the monsoon. When the rains came, they planted and tended the fields. In winter, they removed weeds, controlled pests, and prepared for harvest. There was no idle season for an estate worker. 

Work in the paddy fields was mostly rain-dependent, and the once-a-year harvest demanded intense effort. For two to four months, Aitha was assigned to guard the fields. During the day, he worked wrapped in a plastic sheet and woolen blanket against the rain. After a long day and a simple meal at home, he climbed his manchige at night. 

The nights under the manchige were freezing. The wind blew through the cracks, and the wooden floor felt damp and cold. The fire gave little warmth, and sometimes raindrops leaked through the roof, hissing as they hit the flames. His old blanket was never enough; the chill sank deep into his bones. He could see his breath turn white in the air. 

Still, Aitha sat there, eyes sharp, watching the fields. He took a puff from his beedi and hummed a folk song to stay awake. 

Tannana tananaa

Rain has come to greet us,

Mother Earth is happy to feed us,

Hoiyaare hoiyaare. 

As darkness deepened, his eyes adjusted, and from his perch, he could see even the faintest movement. His thoughts drifted back — to how he had inherited this job from his father, how in his youth he would accompany him on night duty, and later, how he had married a woman from a nearby village. He remembered her dusky beauty and how she had mesmerized him. 

His memories wandered further — to the night he once saw a flaming torch approaching his house. At first, he feared it was a ghost. Later, under the influence of toddy, he gathered courage and chased it, only to find Beerappa, his landlord, lurking near his home. Filled with anger, Aitha raised his machete and warned him,

“Landlord, this won’t be good if it continues.”

After that night, the mysterious torch never appeared again. 

Years passed. Landlord Beerappa fell ill and died, and his wife Manjamma took charge of their land. Cousin Surappa often helped her whenever she needed support, putting aside their old enmity. Life went on in its usual rhythm. 

But one memory still haunted him. 

One year, at the start of December, the mist was thick and the chill unbearable. Aitha fell sick with fever and could not work during the day. His body shivered, but despite his weakness, he forced himself to climb the manchige at night. His grown children refused to take his place — they wanted a life in town. 

That night, the cold was intense, and the wind roared so loudly that even Aitha’s shouts were drowned by the storm. Sometime past midnight, he heard a loud Dummmm! — a gunshot. Weak and trembling, Aitha pushed aside the curtain of his manchige and tried to look outside, but the mist was so thick that the icy air rushed into his face. He couldn’t see anything except a blanket of white fog.

He tried to shout, “Who… who is that?” but his voice was swallowed by the wind. His eyes widened — through the dark and misty weather, he could see nothing. For a moment, he thought he heard a groan somewhere in the distance, but then silence returned. 

The next morning, he dragged himself to the roadside tea shop near the village. People were murmuring — Surappa’s wife, Leelamma, had been shot dead. Some whispered that Manjamma, the late Beerappa’s wife, had been having an affair with Surappa, and when Leelamma opposed it, she met her fate. Later, the death was declared a suicide. 

As Aitha walked back home, he remembered how he had often seen the other landlord carrying a torch and crossing the fence at night. But he said nothing — it wasn’t his house this time. He no longer wished to get involved in others’ troubles. He even felt thankful for the fever that had kept him away that night — otherwise, he might have been dragged into the mess himself. 

He whistled and hummed as he walked through the fields, back home. 

Tanannaa... tanannaanaaa...

Big folk have their bigger fights,

Small ones dream of peaceful nights.

The rich will reap what they have sown,

The poor will guard what’s barely grown.

Hoiyaare... hoiyaare... hoya.. hoyaareee... 

The truth Aitha had witnessed from his manchige stayed locked within him — hidden behind the wooden walls he had built. The wind, the rain, and the fields were his only silent witnesses.

Yet whispers spread like wildfire, and the secret he had guarded so faithfully was no longer his alone.

 

 

 

 

By Steven Mascarenhas
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Comment on this article

  • Canute Pinto, Mangalore /Dubai

    Wed, Oct 29 2025

    Awesome story, which reminds me of the days of the old where people go and sleep or awake on the watch tower which is called Manchige, usually build from the bamboo trees for watching crops, procting them from the wild boars, jackles, cows and some times from thieves when the crop is ready for harvest, but nowadays in many places CC cameras and drones replacing that 'Manchige' traditional watch hut. Certainly 'Manchige' is for brave ones who spend night in the lonely, cold and silence fields far away from homes. This story take us to the past traditions of out culture. Great story and the perfect title! Dear Steven waiting for your next story. God bless Daijiworld.com "a modern day virtual Manchige" for publishing interesting stories to the readers around the world.

  • Steven, Kalasa

    Wed, Oct 29 2025

    Janet, Mangalore/Kuwait, Sorry that I didn't recognize the missed opportunity, it could have been something wonderful, thank you for appreciating my work,

  • Steven, Kalasa

    Wed, Oct 29 2025

    Thank you, Vivek, Reshma, Maria, and Janet, for your wonderful comments. Your words truly keep me motivated to continue writing. Yes, Janet — it’s the same experience I had while walking through those paddy fields, especially as a kid returning from midnight Christmas Mass. I always wished there was a shelter there for the night, because the chill was so intense! Sure, Janet — my email ID is steveprakash@yahoo.com. It would be wonderful if I could meet your papa someday.

  • Janet, Mangalore/Kuwait

    Wed, Oct 29 2025

    @Steven, you always deal with a theme that is close to nature and close to my heart, what I experienced as a five year old kid. This time it is "Manchige", but our manchige was the center point to coffee plantation, the spacious yard drying coffee beans. We as kids just used it to play, climb up, jump down from that height, sometimes get injured, get parents' attention etc. But your emotions towards the nature is breathtaking, your "Aitha" -a powerful character that represents all those whom we met 50 years ago. It's a beautiful experience to go through this storyline, it's engaging throughout, natural, authentic, balanced, simple yet more impactful. Within a fraction of a second, it carries me to my childhood days! Your skills in this field are incredibly powerful. I wish you had met my papa atleast once in life who could share his 22years of life experiences in coffee plantation in the western ghats.

  • Maria, Mangalore/dubai

    Tue, Oct 28 2025

    Well written. Story' aitha name was very pleasant to read and his life in the village Keep writing All the best

  • Reshma Dsouza, Moodubelle

    Tue, Oct 28 2025

    Dear Steven, Your story is truly commendable. The narrative was coherent, and the emotional depth reflected great thought and creativity. I appreciate the way you maintained clarity and engagement throughout. Excellent work! Keep it up !

  • Vivek, Mangalore/Dubai

    Tue, Oct 28 2025

    What a story....just Aitha and his Manchige...and the entire Malnad region it's wonders... amazing talent author...well done 👍

  • Steven, Kalasa

    Tue, Oct 28 2025

    Thank you Naveen Frank, for your Encouraging words, means a lot.

  • Naveen Frank, Mangalore/Sharjah

    Tue, Oct 28 2025

    What a beautifully written and deeply evocative story! “Manchige” captures not just the life of Aitha, but also the spirit of an entire era — a time when loyalty, hardship, and silent endurance defined the lives of rural workers. The vivid descriptions of the paddy fields, the cold misty nights, and the watchtower life bring the Malnad countryside alive in the reader’s mind. Steven Mascarenhas has masterfully blended realism with emotion, weaving themes of human dignity, class divide, and the quiet resilience of the working man. The folk verses add a lyrical charm, giving the story an authentic cultural rhythm. A moving and memorable narrative — one that lingers long after reading. Compliments to the author for portraying the simplicity, depth, and unspoken truths of village life with such sensitivity and grace. Keep it going Stephen. Naveen Frank Sharjah, UAE

  • Steven, Kalasa

    Tue, Oct 28 2025

    Thank you Divya, Rita, Santosh and Jossie for your Valuable comment, I truly appreciate them ....I too learned that from you Rita that encouraging all the writers in this Forum.

  • Veera, Udupi

    Tue, Oct 28 2025

    Nice Suspense plot, thrilling plot, thanks for the story.

  • Jeevan, Mangalore / Dubai

    Tue, Oct 28 2025

    Captivating way of writing, nice plot of village life of a Villager, waiting lot more from you

  • KtDsouza, Mangalore

    Tue, Oct 28 2025

    Nicely written, very engaging plot, now nature is vanished in someone's Childhood,.

  • Saumya, Bangalore

    Tue, Oct 28 2025

    Very Nice and Natural Plot, Liked your story

  • Anjali, Javali , Chikmangalore

    Mon, Oct 27 2025

    I read all your stories . All were superb. This MANCHIGE was marvellous 👏. You bring reality in the story. Keep writing. Waiting for such more stories.

  • Jossie Mascarenhas, Bajpe

    Mon, Oct 27 2025

    What a beautiful story! I was deeply moved by the way you portrayed Aitha’s silent strength and loyalty as he kept vigil over the fields, night after night. Your vivid descriptions of the misty nights, the fire in the Manchige and the heavy golden rice brought the scene to life in my mind. It takes real skill to make a character as ordinary as Aitha feel so memorable and heroic. Thank you for sharing this — I can’t wait to read more of your stories. Kudos to you, Steven, for giving voice to such humble yet worthy characters! 👌👌👍👍🔥🔥❤❤😊😊

  • Santosh pinto, Mangalore

    Mon, Oct 27 2025

    Truly well-written story! It took me back to my childhood memories of running through the paddy fields. You’ve beautifully captured the essence of nature and the internal issues within the wealthy class. Moreover, you’ve portrayed Aitha’s role wonderfully. Keep sharing more , I’m your regular reader

  • Rita, Germany

    Mon, Oct 27 2025

    Dear Steven ,a nice story from Coffee planters.I heard such ones as I was young whats all happening in plantage.Fearful sometimes and wonderful one what you have written.Write further ,Thank you for the Manchige.

  • Divya, Brahmavara

    Mon, Oct 27 2025

    Very nice and interesting story. I liked this story , very engaging. Keep writing.


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